17 Mayıs 2012 Perşembe

TWO GREAT CITIES

              Becoming a student has given me the opportunity of living in two cities at the same time;Denizli and İstanbul.Living in each city has let me see many differences betweeen the both,but there are three main contrasts between them which are traffic,social life and places.
               
                Usually the first difference that all people see is traffic.İstanbul is the most crowded city so it has a lot  of traffic problems.People live easly at the traffic.However Denizli is less traffic problems than the İstanbul.Because;Denizli is less small so people are more relax than İstanbul.


                 Another great difference is social life.İstanbul has social life more than Denizli.It has a lot of bar and different night club but Denizli hasn't much.A lot of people live in İstanbul so there are more energetic city to Denizli.Denizli is more calm than İstanbul.


                  Last difference is places.Denizli located in the Aegean whereas İstanbul located in the Marmara.İstanbul advanced in tems of touristic places but Denizli is fainter than İstanbul so it is advenced in terms of history places.It has a lot of famous historical places and mosques.For example;Topkapı,Dolmabahçe places;Sultan Ahmet,Selimiye mosque.Denizli has fewer touristic attraction such as Pamukkale,Leodokya,Karahayıt.In addition to İstanbul located in by the sea but Denizli isn't sea side.


                  If we make all these features in mind İstanbul is more arttractive.I really would like to live in İstanbul.It has a lot of different features than the other cities suc as social life,different places,sea side.Because of all of them it is really a dream like city:)

2 yorum:

  1. People live easly at the traffic?? what does this mean?

    Last difference is places? not places but location?

    maybe, you can change the style of your topic sentences, because they all have the same structure. you can say:
    finally, denizli and istanbul differ from each other in terms of their locations.

    maybe you can start your conclusion with a more general sentence stating that denizli and istanbul have some differences.

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