There are many bad situation negatively effects people's lives.These situations are often both material and moral damage to people.Traffic accidents are one of them.Nowadays traffic accidents are very common so several questions come to mind of the accident.For example,Why do people traffic accident?,Have you ever had a traffic accident?,What are the causes of traffic accidents?There are different causes of traffic accidents.Some of them are carelessness,alcohol and overspeed.
Carelessness is at the beginning of the most important causes of traffic accidents.There are various reasons that cause the carelessness.If you are to sleep and in this way driving,you are able to collect the attention of so you can traffic accident.In another example of,you deal with order things while you were driving a car your attention is shifted in that direction such as talk to by mobile phone or someone to talk to dive next to or If you have a child in the car,you take care of him or her.All these reasons lead to the disintegration of our attention.Our attention is shifted in other directions.As a result of all these accidents become inevitable.
Another important reason for accidents is alcohol.Alcoholic people's consciousness isn't fully in place so they may experience bad situations.Accidents are at the beginning of their income.If a person use alcohol,he or she certainly shouldn't drive a car.Because,he/she can cause very large accidents.Today eighty percent of traffic accidents due to this reasons.To prevent this situations are founded in various law such as fine and imprisonment.However; a big change isn't occurring in this situation.People continue to behave unconscious.
The last reason is important to other causes overspeed.When people are late, they can often overspeed.Do you think this a correct behavior?This is not a correct behavior.Because,accident has occurred due to wrong behaviors.Some are doing it for pleasure.The main roads are doing racing.They feel themselves on the racetrack.They are not awere of their cause of traffic accidents.
To summarize,Today millions of traffic accident has occurred due to various reasons.Carelessness,alcohol and overspeed come at the beginning of all reasons traffic accidents.If we want prevent traffic accident,people should become conscious.
your introduction is really well organized. but maybe you can combine your thesis and the sentence just before it like this:
YanıtlaSilWhat are the causes of traffic accidents? among these questions, I think the causes of traffic accidents are the most essential one. There are different causes of traffic accidents some of which are carelessness,alcohol and overspeed.
too sleepy
you may not gather your attention while driving and as a result have accident.
ordinary things while driving such as talking on the phone, ...and your attention could be distracted.
not shift but "distract"
maybe not alcoholic but people drinking alcohol..
they are not fully conscious of their behaviours
accidents come first in this list
in your second body, you can talk about what happens when people drive, what kind of changes can be observed (cant focus, get sleepy, rexlexes can get slower etc.)
its nice that you have given statistics.
I like your conclusion paragraph.
thanks your view my teacher:)) I will consider your opinion
YanıtlaSilI think you explain this reason a lot of examples and knowledges.Your essay's concluding pragraf is very good
YanıtlaSili like your essay because your essay is very fluently. you said that ' ... he or she certainly shouldn't drive a car.Because,he/she can cause ....' alternatively you can write 'you'
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